Friday, March 28, 2008

FOCUS!

FOCUS!

It's one of the most important elements of writing a song that will communicate to the hearts of millions of listeners.

One of the greatest deficits I find in the work of aspiring songwriters is that they try to cover too much information in one song. They may start with a Great Idea -- and they may even come up with a Great Hook/Title. But then, they get caught up in the PROCESS of writing and begin to "wander" from the central point of the song.

Remember: The thing you want listeners to remember is that ONE line of melody and lyric that expresses the MAIN POINT of the song. It doesn't matter how many beautiful poetic words you use or how much music theory you incorporate into your song. IF LISTENERS GET LOST, THEY CHANGE THE CHANNEL AND YOUR SONG IS GONE! The listener HAS to "get it" if you want to write a song that connects with millions.

The Hook/Title is your ARRIVAL POINT. It is the "focal point" of the song. Everything else about the song...the verses, the bridge and even the rest of the chorus has to arrive at the Hook.

You only have 3-31/2 minutes to get the listener from absolutely NO knowledge of what your song is about, to the heart of its message. DON'T GET SIDETRACKED!

Remember: You have lots of songs in you! You don't have to put all your great ideas and rhymes into one song. Keep your song -- and your listeners -- FOCUSED!

Keep your "eyes on the PRIZE" which in the case of songwriting is that ONE GREAT HOOK!

2 comments:

Joan said...

Hello Mary, My name is Joan Arthurs I enjoyed your articles, Thanks for all that you do, for songwriters such as myself. I do strive to write songs with a strong Hook/Title, that captures the heart. I am going to send you a few songs to be critque.

Thanks again
Joan

Mary Dawson said...

Hi Joan:

Thanks for your note. I will look forward to hearing your songs. Keep writing....

Blessings,
Mary